Re: According to the Tip of a Knife

[Velesia]

An interesting start. Good style, perhaps not flowing, but certainly not Hawthorne. Nice imagery and depiction of emotion though.
(I critique. Take none of this personally, I'm just trying to help you in any way I can, it's the same for everyone. ^^)

[Nowhere Man]

Velesia said:

An interesting start. Good style, perhaps not flowing, but certainly not Hawthorne. Nice imagery and depiction of emotion though.
(I critique. Take none of this personally, I'm just trying to help you in any way I can, it's the same for everyone. ^^)

No problem. Any input is appreciated.

[Nowhere Man]

Meh. I'm totally revising the first chapter (as it sucked royally), so the story is going to take a little longer than expected to continue. Sorry.