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Post by Rose on Apr 30, 2004 0:37:00 GMT -5
Okay! Here's my poetry/musings thread, which will be updated as often as ... possible. Right. >_> Comments are appreciated and can be made right here in the thread.
And here is my first offering.
Spring Break Pictures
Your pictures came in
My heart aches with memories;
Teardrops on the film
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Post by Rose on May 2, 2004 13:15:07 GMT -5
(Sorry, I know these are rather depressing, but this is what I've been thinking about.)
You ripped your contact
Making your eye much redder
As you cried for me
I knew you loved me
When I held you in my arms
You wept at leaving.
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Post by Lunatic Pandora on May 2, 2004 21:31:23 GMT -5
quite interesting  |
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Post by Squall on May 2, 2004 21:33:17 GMT -5
not that depressing really,not bad too
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Post by Rose on May 2, 2004 22:11:53 GMT -5
Thank you both.  |
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Sir Tymo
Epsilon
I am a shadow
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Post by Sir Tymo on May 2, 2004 22:30:54 GMT -5
You ripped your contact Making your eye much redder As you cried for me That sounds more physicaly painful than depressing, but I like it, and the others. |
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Post by Meyo-san on May 3, 2004 16:17:48 GMT -5
Indeed, it does sound more painful than depressing.
But, it's not like MR dumped you or anything Rose.
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Post by Rose on May 3, 2004 20:29:59 GMT -5
*laughs*
Yes, it looked painful. And yes, you're very right. I'd rather have him be physically gone than gone out of my life forever.
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Post by Rose on May 7, 2004 0:36:40 GMT -5
Red Roses
Red roses used to yield to my flame
Withering, coiling, back to black ashes
All things of love and beauty mine to maim
Violence blurred behind wet lashes
Hatred a crimson wound seared into my mind
Snarling and blaspheming the name of Aphrodite
Shroud of tears to make me blind
Scorn for others’ delight
When from within my prison cell
An angel came to me on raven wings
He took me to heaven, showing me what befell
Those who endured a red rose's stings.
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Post by Squall on May 7, 2004 19:03:30 GMT -5
I really like that one,dont know why but I do
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Post by Rose on May 11, 2004 8:12:46 GMT -5
Thank you very much, Squall! I'm quite fond of that one as well.
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Post by Squall on May 13, 2004 17:10:58 GMT -5
have anymore? I'm enjoying reading these
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Post by Rose on May 15, 2004 22:55:07 GMT -5
Aww, thank you! Well, I have some old ones ... haven't had time to write anything new. I could though. Maybe I should. I'll post something as soon as I write it. |
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Velesia
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Butterflies make Pretty pies
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Post by Velesia on May 16, 2004 10:30:41 GMT -5
Nice, especially that last one.
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Post by Rose on May 23, 2004 18:12:25 GMT -5
Thanks, Vel. New ones! MemoriesLying in my bed Your longing eyes, parted lips begging to be kissed... Lately it seems like...Days melt together Each moment a duplicate Must get out of here... |
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