Mobile Suit Gundam: Indiges

Rose Alpha Demon Eyes Posts: 1,422	Mobile Suit Gundam: Indiges Jun 8, 2004 16:58:51 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rose on Jun 8, 2004 16:58:51 GMT -5 Good so far. Just remember that pronouns are your friend and verbose doesn't equal instant gold. Oh, and why do you use the characters' full names all the time?

Fireball Beta I'm not even supposed to be here today. Posts: 623	Mobile Suit Gundam: Indiges Jun 8, 2004 17:01:03 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Fireball on Jun 8, 2004 17:01:03 GMT -5 I don't know.
	www.frostitution.net/gallery/images/shaun/whitelines.gif