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Post by Craze on Jan 17, 2005 2:09:29 GMT -5
Update:
Chapter 14 rough draft (The fight between Neoh and Axel) is done. Speaking of which, Neoh's character has been thrown in the recycle bin and is being reconstructed because I realized my original structure of his character just plain sucked and was too cliche. Along with that, Cyg's character will be tuned due to the change (meaning no sibling rivalry.) Chapters 13 and 12 have been meshed all together into one chapter. Chapter 11 will soon be in writing.
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Post by Craze on Feb 7, 2005 21:16:45 GMT -5
Update:
I screwed everything up. Due to content, I added another project to this story, making it twice as long and crazy. Death. Cute creatures. Nuclear War. And Morals.
Anyway, Draco's fight scene is in writing, along with the addition of Steel (though, the only reason I named the character Steel is because he dies, rather quickly.) Ai and Cyg's introductions in the story are basically done.
Oh, and Fireball, I screwed up your character. So, just to let you know, I forgot to make you an outlaw and went in a different direction.
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Post by Craze on Feb 21, 2005 20:52:46 GMT -5
Yet, another update:
Chapter 11 rough draft is done.
Since I have 5 chapters left (4 of which I started about half of) before I turn this to my old English teacher to critique, I'll be finishing, hopefully, a chapter a week; which leaves one or two weeks to edit before this critique.
Hopefully, soon I can get Chapter 6 up.
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Post by Craze on Mar 25, 2005 1:39:39 GMT -5
Update:
My chapter a week bit dubiously failed, since I've gone two weeks without writing jack. So, I'll try to write extensively this current break since I took out a campout, and hopefully my constant videogaming self won't interfere too much. With luck, Chapter 6 will be up soon (I seem to be repeating myself, no?)
And since I have an impatience of getting it to be proofread, hopefully that'll give me the drive I need to finish it (even if I'll probably wing most of what I write.)
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Post by Craze on Apr 10, 2005 14:45:19 GMT -5
Update:
Neoh's new character:
There is an phrase of “Hear No Evil, Speak No Evil, See No Evil.” It is trivial how an evil man can apply that and stay the way he is, despite what he does. However, he takes more to a fundamental stand-point that is both smart yet still quite insane. He and his sister, Cyg, were orphans for a family but soon later ran away. Unknown is how they got to know Aries but it is just supposed it is the other around, Aries found them. Neoh was quite knowledgable, very well educated and brooded over philosophy many times throughout the periods of his daily life. Unlike Cyg, he became more weopon efficient and more thoughtful of the reality around him. He wanted to keep his mind pure, to where no outside force could influence the points of his philosophy so that he can constantly keep to his studies. There for, he gouged out his eyes and sewed his mouth, eyes, and ears shut. Now confined to a wheelchair the rest of his life, he spends his days constantly in thought. The only one that can talk to him or give him an order is Cyg. She traces her fingers upon his scalp and that gives him his orders. Despite the loss of 3 senses, he gained a sixth sense as one of his powers. Proficient in sniping, he uses this ESP to lock on targets from afar, giving distance from him and his enemy. But, nothing else really can be said from a person who lives the rest of his life as a chamber.
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Post by Craze on Apr 10, 2005 20:21:32 GMT -5
Update (another on the same day! Shazam!) :
I finally got (most of) the first portion of this done and will be giving it to my current English teacher tomorrow and my old English teacher Tuesday to be proof-read. I just hope I don't get kicked out of school what with the Patriot Act being so strict.
Total Pages (so far): about 75
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Post by Craze on Apr 19, 2005 19:30:55 GMT -5
I scared my old Englsih teacher by the size of it thus far, which makes me happy.
Anyways, Chapter 18 done, winged the whole thing in 13 minutes. Others will come soon. And Chapter 7 will be up soon.
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Post by Craze on Apr 28, 2005 20:46:03 GMT -5
Oops. I screwed up. My story is being reformed, because, at where it is, it's just way too damn difficult for readers to understand. So things are now in more linear manner, so all those miscellaneus chapters that make no sense have been taken out, deleted off the Kill Aries thread.
But, that's good on ya'lls part. Originally, Chapter 6 was going to be the last chapter I'd post, because I feared of giving away too much. But since this new format I'm doing just tells the story straight-through, I think I'll actually show ya'll the whole thing (though, if you watned to see what was up with those other chapters, you'll have to wait till it is finished.)
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Post by Craze on May 27, 2005 11:33:08 GMT -5
New Update (like ya'll care:)
Li is dead. Squall is dead. Kill Aries is almost finished, got one more scene left, the final confrontation with Ai, Cyg, Neoh, and Aries. This is Sunday I'll post Draco and Steele's death.
Also, I think I found a publisher that takes stories 40,000 words or more so I'm looking into it.
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Post by Dark Aries on May 29, 2005 4:30:23 GMT -5
*puts an arm about Craze's shoulders.*
We, sir, need to start talkin' about likeness rights if you're going for the dough here now...
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Post by Ai on May 29, 2005 10:23:42 GMT -5
Too bad you're nothing like the character used in the story.
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Post by Craze on May 29, 2005 14:40:49 GMT -5
Aries, if you have a problem, IM me.
Oh snap, it's Sunday...
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Post by Craze on May 29, 2005 21:57:15 GMT -5
Update:
4/9ths of the story has been cut, leaving the Prologue, Kill Aries, and one other story. I should be able to finish it earlier now.
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Post by Craze on Jun 27, 2005 11:26:33 GMT -5
Update:
Holy crap! Kill Aries is actually finished (Aries last 9-page monologue was a bitch to finish.) The other stories are close to done, so hopefully I'll finish it soon and start editing it (I'm hoping to send it off by October.)
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Post by Craze on Jul 14, 2005 3:14:06 GMT -5
Update:
Dammit, having to retype the endings is aggrivating, and taking long. And so much taking out and putting back in and taking out in different parts, the damn thing can't stay put with one structure. Grrrr, this editing isn't getting any easier. Atleast I don't have to worry about Kill Aries (plus, it's just satisfying to see Ai get bitch slapped by Aries, then Ai shoot Aries to death.) It's everything else that I have to worry about now, bringing it all together.
Now I got to finish it before band camp, along with reading my required reading, and all that cal. Busy, busy, busy.
Oh yeah, I have decided that due to later having to get permission from ya'll to use ya'll's names (and also to my laziness for not wanting to go through the trouble of getting 15+ people's permission) Wag, Fireball, Steel, Raz, Beo, Project_chick, and Gunn are being cut. Sab is possibly being cut also, but I'm thinking about it, she might stay.
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